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Post by Ciel Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:08 am

Im not entirly sure on where to place this, since theres no lit area, i believe it was deleted long ago. But anywho, heres a story that ive been working on, inspired by the moment, having a new blog, so yeah.

It follows the life of a girl who is called Spy (her real name unknown).

Here's the first chapter.

Float
Chapter one - It

"This is it" she thought as she stared at her self infront of the
mirror placing cherry lip gloss on nice and easy. Her hair was all
nicely combed, and her black dress couldn't go with it any better.
"This is it"



The thought of seeing him again after a long going argument made her
think of her priorities, there are things that they both like, and
things that are just far off one sided. "I've made up my mind"



She took one last look at the mirror as she shut the light close
followed by a quick push on the door as she made her way out of her
apartment.



Every step that she took felt heavier and heavier as she was getting
closer at there said meeting place. "Focus SPY focus" she said as she
deflected her thoughts from the piercing stares of everyone around her,
they were like tiny needles poking you and poking you until you finally
bleed and scream out loud "I've made up my mind"



With a little yell her imaginary thought turned reality, with a little
outburst they all stared at her, for real this time, but she kept on
walking as she finally saw the familiar figure, of a boy she's sworn to
love till eternity does them part.



Her heart kept pounding faster and faster, for she did love him, or
living him still, but she had to put and end to it, she just had to get
over this cliff. "Trent.." he was looking a far as if he didnt see her
at all "Your late" was his first word.



Of all the words to say to your all so loyal girl friend who even took
the initiative to dress up for you to make her presence grow even by
just a little, you just had to kill it off... did you.



"Well, i walked" thinking of the which words to say, she stumbled upon
two paths, one is to act all bitchy, and the other was to just act like
she always does 'tolerate him'



she chose to tolerate him "Its a waste of money to take a cab just to get here, figured its not that far, so i walked"



Yet again, it was like her words meant nothing, like it just flew right
through his ears. "Well, you did want to talk... talk" he then spoke
the coldest words she never expected to hear ever coming from a boy who
swore to love her back.



"Whats your problem?" with just that line, the flame grew larger "Did i
do something wrong by any chance? Cause i dunno, Trent, your the smart
one, enlighten me."



They were silenced as a subway passed by but continued when it left
again. "I just... dont think i can love anyone who cant love me
back..." with those words she knew it, that was it... The It she didnt
expect this early on there relationship.



"Your breaking up with me?" she yelled in her mind, she wanted to
scream it all out, to slap him about and leave, but she froze, as if
shocked releived, but deeply saddened by the fact that he said it.



"Lets cool it off... and maybe see other people" He continued as Spy
just walked close to him and rested her right hand on his chest for one
last time and left without a word.



"This is it..." she thought as she walked out of the subway station,
loveless and emotionless. "The it that never will be" she continued as
drops of rain began falling down from the skies, as if greaving for her.



But she thought otherwise "I left my umbrella"
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Post by Ciel Wed Dec 30, 2009 3:58 pm

Heres chapter 2 @.@


The boy named Trent
Months Ago

One hot summer day in the University of Westwick, was a day like any other, but unlike those days, something unusual occurred.

If you didn’t live in Westwick its understandable not to have an umbrella with you 99% of the time, but for a commoner, you should know of the unpredictable weather.

But for a girl who lived there since the age of 5, experienced such an unusual event, for an umbrella slipped through her mind.

“This is the first time that this has happened.” She said to her self as she stared up at the sky blue skies, hoping it won’t turn grey, both her nightmares in disguise.

Time went on, and not much had happened, but as it was time to go home, all that was heard was the sound of thunder.

The gushing winds, and the whisking splashes, the sky drops away all of its condensed masses.

She run through the long slippery streets, where everyone and everyone only saw her an odd in all the masses.

She run and run but as she finally reached a shed, she bumped a man as he slowly said “You okay? Strange weather isn’t it?” from his face she already knew, that he was someone not from town. With his unfamiliar face, and his lack of ‘Westwickness’, she knew it, he wasn’t from around.

“Yeah” she couldn’t help but smile and just agree with him for she noticed that like her he was wet all about. “Just visiting?”

He smiled at and said “Nope, just moved in about 2 days ago.” her heart felt a sudden tightening same time as it felt it like fell off somewhere else, somewhere far and distant where no dreams could ever reach of. “Love” she thought, it was love at first sight, “Its so magical” it was something new to her, a weird sensation which was painful yet elating at the same time.

But noticing as she was still just staring at him like a frozen statue after being blessed upon by his dangerous freeze ray like smile, she went to her defrost mode and finally spoke. “Oh I see hahaha” It sounded way sarcastic, but it was the best she could do right after the shock of falling over and up again. “You should bring an umbrella” she added as a short silence filled the small shed.

The silence was cut of with him telling her the exact same words “ You should to ” he smiled at her again, as she just did the same, giggling started rising as it became louder then turned into laughter.

As half an hour passed right under the shabby shed they stood in, it was time to say goodbye, for the rains, started to dry off. “Well it was nice meeting you” he said as he offered his hand for a gentle man hand shake, which she expected from him already knowing him just enough to that point. “Spy” she said then gave her hand to shake his hand back.

“Spy?” he snickered at the thought, holding the laughter in a little bit but didn’t let his composure down and continued and said “I’m Trent” as he shook the already shaking hands harder.

“Well that’s a rare name” Spy said letting go of his hand just staring down at those marble hazel nut greens in his eyes. “Well, yours not really a name, is it?” he joked as she believed that he was staring at hers the same way she was at his.

“Uhuh” Spy then turned around then walked away a little as he was still staring at her walk away from him “I’ll see you around” she said as she turned one last time to wave one last time and waved goodbye. “That didn’t turn out the way you wanted it to be” He then followed up before she made a turn into the next street. “Your just turning it onto something you want it to be” she replied poking her head out for one last time and then headed off, with her heart still beating faster and faster, feeling all hot inside… and then.. she sneezes… “I hate the rain!”
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