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My charatcer....Blt.

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My charatcer....Blt.

Post by Bluelink6 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 12:41 pm

Name : Blt ( he odes ont know his real name.
Age: 16
Backstory: The reason Blt does not know his real name is because he was only named By his initials- His Parnets were killed shrotly after his birth, having never deicded his full name , and he was adopted by a Farmer. Afyer growing up on the farm, learning archery, he left seeking something in his life. Advenure, which he has found on numerous occasions, and ocme out always slighlty owrse ofr wear.

Appearance: Blt Wears A Dark blue Tunc, with a sheild on his back, however he rarely uses it.

Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
He wears a pair of Brown gauntlets, And Brown leather boots, Which are rough and old, but he uses them still.

CLass: Blt, upon leavingt he farm, had very little money. Thereofre, he took into the business of a rogue- Theft, lockpicking, and backstabbing. However, he has never been very good at lockpicking.

Eqquipment: bow, arrows, 2 handed sword and 2 daggers.


Arrow power: Using these arrows, Blt strikes fast, but ttehy are not too powerful, msot damage they could od to you is if they get stuck in you, or the shaft snaps off leaving the point in.

2 hand sword power : This blade is heavy, Andt herefore difficult to strike people with. But when it odes hit,it odes a fair amount of damage, but not enough to maim someone.

dagger power: The daggers Blt owns are intended for quick, not very powerful stirkes, but enough to distract someone.

I hope thats alright.
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Re: My charatcer....Blt.

Post by Juss on Thu Mar 26, 2009 12:45 pm

Well if this profile might be accepted in some roleplays, it won't be accepted as a RPB character, yet. Please make it more detailed and add extra sections like personality. This means how he acts and what he is like as a person. And well, if you add more things to appearance, you might be accepted Wink

BTW! If you can and know how, fix all the typos you see!
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Post by Bluelink6 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 12:47 pm

Got it. Ill go edit that tommorrow, but i have ot log off now.
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Post by Juss on Thu Mar 26, 2009 12:50 pm

Okay Wink Don't rush, take your time while editing it Smile More time usually means more quality.
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Okay, let's try this again....

Post by Bluelink6 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:19 am

Name : Blt ( he odes ont know his real name.
Age: 16
Backstory: The reason Blt does not know his real name is because he was only named By his initials- His Parnets were killed shrotly after his birth, having never deicded his full name , and he was adopted by a Farmer. Afyer growing up on the farm, learning archery, he left seeking something in his life. Advenure, which he has found on numerous occasions, and ocme out always slighlty owrse ofr wear.

Appearance: Blt Wears A Dark blue Tunic, with a sheild on his back, however he rarely uses it.

Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
He wears a pair of Brown gauntlets, And Brown leather boots, Which are rough and old, but he uses them still.
Skin: Pale and rough, Blt's skin has become thsi way form years of use ofh is hands in hard owrk. In his psare itme, the farmer who adopted blt would make him forge tools like pitchforks, And blt's bow itslef was made by him, after he had spent a while learning how to make one.

CLass: Blt, upon leavingt he farm, had very little money. Thereofre, he took into the business of a rogue- Theft, lockpicking, and backstabbing. However, he has never been very good at lockpicking.

Eqquipment: bow, arrows, 2 handed sword and 2 daggers.


Arrow power: Using these arrows, Blt strikes fast, but ttehy are not too powerful, msot damage they could od to you is if they get stuck in you, or the shaft snaps off leaving the point in.

2 hand sword power : This blade is heavy, Andt herefore difficult to strike people with. But when it odes hit,it odes a fair amount of damage, but not enough to maim someone.

dagger power: The daggers Blt owns are intended for quick, not very powerful stirkes, but enough to distract someone.

Personality: Blt is typically quiet, and rarely speaks- But among allies, He will speak freely.
He Does not talk to anybody that much becuase, having grown up on his own on a farm, he never had anything to talk about to anybody, so therefore he is usually quiet and reserved.

Past-times: Blt, when not on adventures usually spends time forging arrow tips, or makin arrow shafts, which he does fairly often, becuase unless he has recentyl assasinated someone big, he cannot afford arrows, which is why he makes his own. However, Blt takes pleasure at killing anybody he is paid to kill, ofr it gives him satisfaction knowing he is quiet enough ot kill, and the victim never even knows he is there- Altohugh- on a few occasions, this has led him to trouble with bodyguards who do hear him, and attack- these have happenned on the itmes he has failed his murderous missions, which are few and far between.

Weapon description:

Twin Daggers-
These Seemingly Simple, yet deadly, daggers were originally Another theif's. However, This theif was killed by Blt on a mission, as an act of revenge by the person who the unnamed theif had robbed.
These daggers have intricately carved serpents on it, each one hissing at each other, baring fangs.

2-Handed sword: This large, tihck, deadly sowrd was gained By Blt at high price- After assasinating a rich man, Blt proceeded to rob his house, inlcuding the decorative wepaons that were on the walls. However, the cost of this was that he was stalked by the man's brother, who then alerted authorities, and therefore Blt had to leave the palce he called home, otherwise he would have been caught and killed. It has no special patterns on the blade, however, there was A ruby on the handle on one isd,e a sapphire on the other, but both were taken By Blt and sold, and the handle re-forged.


Bow: This Bow was made Blt during his earlier days as An archer. However, as time goes on, this bow grows weary; and though Blt knows this, He has become very attched to it, and will use it until the dya it breaks- even tohugh he knows, inevitably, that it will likely break at an inconvienient moment, Perhaps on a mission, and alert the target ot him.

Arrows: Most of bBlt's arrows are his own, with his own special marking. Every arrow he has made ofr years has had his special serpent mark engraved on them, which he engraves into them by using his daggers- Inpractical, but he odes it as a tradition, as well ast he fact that the symbol on his daggers he has adopted as his own crest, and that is mimicked on these arrows.

Shield: This sheild is the only peice of equipment that Blt did not make- He knew taht his ofrging skills did not extend as far as making good, solid, steel sheilds. However, this is not marked with ihs crest, as he believes if people saw this, they may realise who we was, and alert authorities.

The sheild is fairly simple, plain, Dark Blue, with silver trimming around the outside.

Gauntlets: These were also bought by Blt, for a small price. they are simple and brown with no special properties, however, they are also in dire need of replacement, as they are old, and worn out, however they still are of use.


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Re: My charatcer....Blt.

Post by Juss on Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:35 pm

Almost the thing it should be Wink Nice upgrade. You should have just edit your last post. There was no need for new one but as it is already here, let it be. If you can, please fix as many typos as possible as it's hard and annoying to read at the moment. When you get done with it, I will accept it.

EDIT: As Chris stated below, add some details to weapons as well. How they work and what abilities they got.


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Post by Tidus on Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:40 pm

could you please add a bit of information about the weapons, just listing them doesn't give a very good mental picture of how they look
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Re: My charatcer....Blt.

Post by Bluelink6 on Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:23 pm

Okay- Ill edit the post above, remove the typo's are far As i cna see, and finish it.


Edit: There, edited.
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Post by Juss on Sun Mar 29, 2009 4:03 am

Well that is better! ACCEPTED! Smile
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Post by Bluelink6 on Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:55 am

yay- does this mean I can post in Rp threads now?
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Post by Tempest Wind on Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:58 am

Bluelink6 wrote:yay- does this mean I can post in Rp threads now?

I might not be the mod, but with this character you can now challenge other rpers to a battle..then when it is all done..you two duke it out.Very Happy
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Post by Bluelink6 on Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:02 am

Or i cna join in Rp threads? But how ot enter...
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Post by Juss on Mon Mar 30, 2009 11:03 am

If you want to join a RP, just tell in the RP Sign up thread that you wish to join and link this thread to the post! Wink
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